Thanks Omega999 and SaHa. This guy’s work you can fap too all day lol. If this ever get a hentai adaption, I wonder how they’ll work in all the detailed scenes….Hope they get a good animation studio.
So there were enough typos/missed words in this that I thought it would be worth telling you and requesting a fix be released. Don’t get me wrong, I’ve been really looking forward to this being translated and your work is always good, but this time you missed a couple of things that really should be fixed.
Page 7: So I’m fully of your idecent
Page 18: He’s reaching so dfep (sp) inside me
Page 18: This is an internation problem
Page 21: I don’t why, but… I think I might
Page 22: I think it’s supposed to be “How could you be satisfied doing it bareback when it feels so good”.
Page 23: I’m not positive, since it could be taken in more than one way, but I’m pretty sure the “to” in “My memories of him seem to faint now” should be “too”. Or you could take out the “to” entirely and it would still work and be better than it is currently.
Page 24: I’ve totally given into his horny bastard
Fuck me it sanitized the brackets I used to show the mistakes. Let’s try this again.
Page 7: So I’m fully “aware” of your idecent
Page 18: He’s reaching so “dfep” (sp) inside me
Page 18: This is an internation”al” problem
Page 21: I don’t “know” why, but… I think I might
Page 22: I think you meant to say “How could you be satisfied “not” doing it bareback when it feels so good”.
Page 23: I’m not positive, since it could be taken in more than one way, but I’m pretty sure you meant the “to” in “My memories of him seem to faint now” to be “too”. Or you could take out the “to” entirely and it would still work and be better than it is currently.
Page 24: I’ve totally given into “t”his horny bastard
Not that I’m complaining. I love this series! Even if the art’s so much better now that I have to work hard to force myself to re-read the first volume… and now I have to wait another half a year for the next one…
If they could get the studio that made Bible Black to amimate this series Holy Fuck it would be the new Emperor of hentai anime upvote me if u agree with me
Many thanks Saha and Omega999 Raita’s works are awesome and now we have 10 of these series can’t wait the next one.
Thanks Omega999 and SaHa. This guy’s work you can fap too all day lol. If this ever get a hentai adaption, I wonder how they’ll work in all the detailed scenes….Hope they get a good animation studio.
Awesome. Many thanx Sayo and Omega999.
So there were enough typos/missed words in this that I thought it would be worth telling you and requesting a fix be released. Don’t get me wrong, I’ve been really looking forward to this being translated and your work is always good, but this time you missed a couple of things that really should be fixed.
Page 7: So I’m fully of your idecent
Page 18: He’s reaching so dfep (sp) inside me
Page 18: This is an internation problem
Page 21: I don’t why, but… I think I might
Page 22: I think it’s supposed to be “How could you be satisfied doing it bareback when it feels so good”.
Page 23: I’m not positive, since it could be taken in more than one way, but I’m pretty sure the “to” in “My memories of him seem to faint now” should be “too”. Or you could take out the “to” entirely and it would still work and be better than it is currently.
Page 24: I’ve totally given into his horny bastard
Thanks for the release.
Fuck me it sanitized the brackets I used to show the mistakes. Let’s try this again.
Page 7: So I’m fully “aware” of your idecent
Page 18: He’s reaching so “dfep” (sp) inside me
Page 18: This is an internation”al” problem
Page 21: I don’t “know” why, but… I think I might
Page 22: I think you meant to say “How could you be satisfied “not” doing it bareback when it feels so good”.
Page 23: I’m not positive, since it could be taken in more than one way, but I’m pretty sure you meant the “to” in “My memories of him seem to faint now” to be “too”. Or you could take out the “to” entirely and it would still work and be better than it is currently.
Page 24: I’ve totally given into “t”his horny bastard
Sorry >_>
Okay. Thanks. Typos have been fixed and the links are now updated. Do a browser refresh if necessary.
Thanks a ton
Thanks Bob the critics on typos are always welcome.
Christ, apparently I missed one T-T
Page 24: “warning you about the effects of “mixing” the sex fluids with his sperm”
Idk if that’s worth fixing on its own, that’s up to you.
…What the plot?
Not that I’m complaining. I love this series! Even if the art’s so much better now that I have to work hard to force myself to re-read the first volume… and now I have to wait another half a year for the next one…
oooh, the harem expands.
thanks omega999 and sayo for the release!
Holy crap the next one, time to reread all of it all over again.
Links updated again with the last typo fix.
Awesome, thanks a lot !
Huzzah for more Raita!
If they could get the studio that made Bible Black to amimate this series Holy Fuck it would be the new Emperor of hentai anime upvote me if u agree with me